Cameron Home

The Liar - My First Attempt at a Poem



Posted: Saturday, April 04, 2009

by Cameron Home

This is my first attempt for a poem. It makes no sense, but it is about a liar, who speaks no truth. He seems to be nocturnal from the first quanza it seems. Some of the rhyming bits are off (with plurals etc.) and the ending isn't brilliant but I think I did relatively well for my first attempt, and if it's liked, I might right more. Well, I think I might have said too much, so onto the poem!
 
The Liar
 
At the sun rise,
The liar hides,
He hides his lies,
His hope, his pride.
At the sun set,
The liar awakes,
And his conditions,
They must be met.

During noon,
The liar escapes,
The people who know,
Will say: "So soon?"

The liar lies,
And feels no guilt,
That hidden sigh,
Will soon be built.
 
Mr. Home
Mr. Cameron Home is an average joe who enjoys writing, gaming and just overthinking about the world in general. He also enjoys reading, and take time out of his life just to read and write.

 He is currently co-writing a book with Connor Davidson.
 
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» left by Connor Davidson
 3 years 26 days ago.
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Great attempt. I think you have the rhyming and it reads well.
 
Great poem. Well done.
» left by carol fernandez
from uk 2 years 114 days ago.
Liked this; well done.
» left by Cameron Home 2 years 112 days ago.
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